Anonymously Yours - A New-to-Me Twist on Topic Journals
After many months of not blogging, I've decided to get back in that saddle before I forget how to ride. Here we go again . . .
I’ve been using Topic Journals to get my students excited about writing for a few years now, ever since I heard about the idea on the English Companion Ning. Although I’d like to attribute the idea to its rightful architect, I’m not entirely confident that I have the complete history on its origins. I can tell you that I believe it was Gary Anderson who first introduced me to Topic Journals, and I believe that he attributed the idea to Penny Kittle. For some reason, I also think that the idea for topic journals is linked to Tom Newkirk, but alas, I’m not certain. This is the way it goes in education. Good ideas spread like wildfire and their ancestry is sometimes difficult to pin down. Good ideas are begged, borrowed, stolen, and, thankfully, shared. Since this brilliant idea was shared with me, I want to re-share it with you and, in particular, tell you about the twist that I’ve used this year that has inspired better-than-ever topic journal writing.
Topic journals are shared by a class or several classes and characterized by the topic rather than the writers themselves. Given that topics can be selected to suit the age, maturity, needs, and interests of your students, these journals can be used at any grade level.
Some of the topics I chose this year for my 7th graders include:
Friends
Mom
Dad
Family
Lost
Found
Wishes
Dreams
Fear
Death
Passions
Talent
Regrets
Uncomfortable
Obsessed
Boys
Girls
Online
At School
After School
Weekends
Now, That’s Funny
The key is to have a good range of topics and to have more topics than students so that everyone can choose a topic journal to write in on any given day. Ask your students for suggestions! This year, my students asked me to add:
Love
Places
Sport
Wilderness
The process is simple. You write a topic name on each journal, spread the journals out on a table or the ledge of the blackboard, as I do, and let the students choose one to write in. I ask that students fill a page (7x9” notebook) and that once they’ve made their choice, they stick with it for the full 20 minutes. They date their entries, provide a title - if they wish - and write.
Students usually spend about 20 minutes writing in the journals. Of course, students are anxious to read what others have written in the journals before they begin. In fact, I often hear students telling their friends to choose the topic that they chose last time we wrote in the journals, so that their friends can read their writing. Ah, middle school. It’s all about the friends.
Genres are at students’ discretion, and my students have tried them all - poetry, stories, monologues, nonfiction pieces, personal narrative, letters, persuasive pieces . . . When a student wants to write a longer piece, he/she just writes ‘to be continued’ at the bottom of the page and continues with it the next time or the time after that. In fact, that’s one way to know that the topic journals are really working; they’re inspiring students to work on pieces for extended periods of time, pieces they want to come back to again and again to finish. When students find something they want to put that much effort into, we talk about using the ideas for a more polished piece of writing. More and more this year, I have student writers who want to hang on to those journals for longer periods, who want to come back to them, who wait and watch to see who is reading their last piece.
So what is it about this year's process that has made this year’s journals so much better? This year students are writing semi-anonymously. In previous years I’ve had my students sign their name at the end of their journal entry. I felt it important that students be accountable for their writing, for their words in black and white. My concerns hovered around the potential for the writing to embody complete and utter silliness, to be riddled with gratuitous vulgarity, or perhaps worse, to be sparse and uninspired. In addition, I was eager to use their topic journal writing in student/teacher conferences and, if the writing was worthy, for formative assessments. This year, if they wish to sign their name, they’re more than welcome to, and some do (those are the students who beg their friends to read what they wrote last time). Others identify themselves by their student number instead of their name, which has given us a perfect mix of accountability (I can identify them by their student numbers) and anonymity (to their peers, who don’t know their student numbers).
And it’s been so interesting to watch these anonymous 12 and 13 year olds read one another’s writing with such verve, and write with such abandon. The writing has become meaningful to them in ways that other writing assignments for our class and their blogs are not. Of course these other forms of writing serve students well - very well, in fact - in other ways, but in the topic journals, students are obviously feeling free to try new voices, to play with new ideas, and to say what’s really on their minds. This, for me, seems the true purpose of the topic journal - to experiment.
Why did it take this strange mix of accountability and anonymity to get students writing this way? Why wouldn’t students want to sign their name to what is likely some of the most promising writing they do in my classes? Why aren’t they proud of their ability to dive in, to take risks and try new things?
After some head-scratching, I keep coming back to something I said earlier in this piece - middle school is all about the friends. Students at this age are unsure of themselves, unsure of what they want to show their peers about who they really are and what they can really do, especially if it’s close to their hearts. Risk taking is well . . . too risky. You might stand out. You might show a side of yourself that your friends can’t yet handle. My students are obviously not rattled at the thought that I, their teacher, will see that side of themselves, that I will witness their excellence. They know that I am using their student numbers to identify their writing, and they do not seem worried about baring their thoughts, feelings, and creative minds to me.
I can’t decide if it’s always been this way with adolescents. Was I like that? Oh yeah. I was just like that, but I never had the opportunity to write anonymously. Not in school, in any case.
One more wonderful thing that’s happening with these topic journals is that students are reading one another’s work and wanting to respond, which in and of itself is not incredibly unusual, as they do respond to one another on their blogs. What’s different? They don’t always know the author of the piece to which they are responding. Connections between students who might not otherwise read, write or speak to one another are happening, and even though those connections may not grow into a more open dialogue and a more ‘real life’ connection, I think that it’s pretty wonderful.
This idea definitely did not start with me, but what I love most about your post is the "twist." We need to feel free to adapt good ideas to best fit the needs of our students and styles of our classrooms. If semi-anonymity brings out new dimensions of courage and voice in your students, go for it.
ReplyDeleteThe most remarkable experience I've had with these topic journals was last year when a student wrote about his desire to spend a day dressed as a girl in order to express his feminine side for once in his life. That took a lot of courage, and everyone who read it respected his honesty.
These topic journals have sparked all kinds of longer writing pieces from my students. Thanks to Tom and Penny for the inspiration.
My question now is what to do with all of these full notebooks!
Thanks for this thoughtful post.
Thank you so much, Gary, firstly for sharing the topic journal idea with me years ago, and secondly for sharing this truly remarkable story about your student's experience with it. I just started using the journals again this year a couple of weeks ago and I've read several pieces in them that I know students would not have written had they been in a different venue and had they not been anonymous. I won't share them here and now because I fear that students who may read my blog will recognize them and lose their confidence in the confidentiality of the journals.
ReplyDeleteWhat to do with the journal afterward is a great question. I put them on a shelf in my cupboard at the end of the year, so as you can imagine, they are accumulating. If anyone has a good idea, I'm all ears.
Nice to hear from you Mardie! I think you should bind & publish the journals, for other classes to read. Perhaps each can become completely anonymous now that you have kept track of them. Really, it might be very empowering for the students to see their work read by others. I read the idea in Penny Kittle's book, Write Beside Them-sounds terrific. More practice wiring, too!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading, Linda! I've missed blogging and staying in the loop. Wow! I really like that idea. I'm sure that future students would be inspired by such gracious treatment of former students' work as well. I love it!
DeleteYou're right about the inspiration too. When we celebrate by having public readings or publishing, even binding, it sends such a good message. Sorry about the typo above, guess one could take it as 'wiring'-hm-m-m.
DeleteMardie! It's so great to hear from you again. I tried topic journals a few years back with sophomores and it just didn't seem to work very well. I'm not sure quite what went wrong. I still like the idea, but I'd want to feel confident that I'd resolved the issue, and I'm not even sure what it was.
ReplyDeleteClix! Great to hear from you again too. I'm wondering what it was that didn't work for you:
ReplyDelete- Writing in the journals too often can diminish their appeal. I use them once a week as a sort of idea-generating, inspiration-gathering resource.
- I had to discuss the possibilities within the topics to my classes. Some students take the topics too literally and want to just write everything they know about the topic. For example, last year I used the topic 'water' hoping to get stories that involved lakes or springs or a time when water was all they wanted or needed (after a gruelling soccer game), or poetry on rainfalls and waterfalls or the smell of water after a rain. Many students just wrote about WATER: "Water is important. Without water we would die." And so on. I had to present possibilities to students to get them thinking 'around' the topic.
- If students don't understand the purpose of the journals, or if they have no purpose, perhaps students won't buy in. Students will have to revise one of their entries this year for their blogs or for a more finished piece. In fact, that's one of the reasons I really like Linda's idea on publishing the entries at the end of the year. It provides incentive and acknowledgement of the potential for the writing in the journals to be important.
- Giving time to read the journals before students write is also important. Students want to know that I'm reading them and that their peers are reading. I might have my students select a favoured piece in the journals this year to read aloud. Not their own work, but the work of an anonymous peer.
Maybe none of these things apply to your groups last year. Let me know what you think and what you figure out in the end. Thanks for commenting, Clix!
Mardie,
ReplyDeleteI'd never heard of this idea, but it sounds like a great way to keep kids writing! Do you ever get a student who just "can't think of anything"? I'd guess these are usually the ones who can't think of anything anyway, but maybe you've got a trick for it? Also, do they guess who the other writers are based on their handwriting, even if they just put their number? I've never done anything like this before... It might be something we'll have to pursue in our 7th grade... Thanks for the detailed post!
Hi Mrs. Kirr,
DeleteOf course there's always a student or two that have more trouble thinking of things to write about, or maybe they're just a bit slower to start, but the topic journals do help students come up with something. I think this is true especially after we've written in them for a while, as students get a chance to see the diverse ways in which their peers have approached at topic.
I'm sure some of my students can recognize their friends handwriting, but when you're using the journals for more than one class, it's less likely that students are going to notice unless the friend tells them to look in a particular journal for an entry. The journals don't have to be anonymous, though, and they still work very well.
Let me know if you give them a go. I'd be curious to hear about other teachers' experience with them.
Hello Ms. Mardie, I think encouraging expression of thought in young teenagers is one of the most important ways to encourage open-thinking. Your technique exposes students to other perspectives that might not always be physically heard in the class. I applaud your efforts to help children thrive in their literacy skills. Good luck on your classroom adventures!
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